The Impressive Plot - A Trial Before Monsoon Film

Idea, Individualistic Characters & Impressive Plot – A Trial Before Monsoon

We were digging deeper into approaching our narratives for the screenplay. We kept working on themes, characters, and the actual plot of the film. The developed package ultimately meant for the pitch meetings. Eventually luring in the investors and our production team with whom we were about to collaborate. So, what is it all about?…

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The Spacing Of Your Script

How Altering The Spacing Of Your Script Affects The Production Process

by David Barbeschi | June 6th, 2020 Sometimes, when I’m commissioned to rewrite a script, I come across strange things that are just irritating. Like page-long sex scenes (why?) or overuse of exclamation marks and ellipses (so it reads as if every sentence is either yelled or trails off). In this particular case, the writer/director…

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A Female Character In Your Script

Describing A Female Character In Your Script

by David Barbeschi | May 20th, 2020 So you’ve begun to write your first script. Hurray! Congratulations. You’ve taken the most important step. As you write, you finally reach the point where you have to describe your female character. *clearing my throat* DO NOT COMMENT ON HER PHYSIQUE. Avoid anything like “she is beautiful/gorgeous/sublime/sexy” or…

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